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7/12/24, 8:22 PM
Masterfully done from start to finish. You set up an intricate story arc with interweaving elements, multiple character voicings, startling time shifts, and a number of structural challenges that could have gone haywire at any point - a daunting task at best, and not for the timid - and you held it together like Bernstein conducting the New York Philharmonic, with all the emotional affect, erotic heat, brilliant mind control/TF, and satisfaction for your audience that implies. This is a landmark story. I'll be coming back to it for years. The final moments with the guys are beautifully depicted; your knack for dialogue shines brightly there. And your denouement with Brian in Nepal is the tweak to the cheeks that holds the happy-ending sugar spike in check and keeps the story alive for us, and I hope for you as well. You could easily expand this universe for a long run; these are characters and situations that seem ripe for exploration and linger in the mind and heart. What a ride. Thank you so much for sharing your talent and art with us.
7/12/24, 7:44 PM
I love this idea of being hypnotized (with consent!) to get a piercing. Would love to even see some tattoos pop up :)
7/12/24, 7:34 PM
What a geat ending of this story. Brian get his comeuppance. Javi gets to explore the world after all those years. Joe and Noah being a horny couple. And finally Tyler finally realizing he is inlove with Riley and them being together. And them being able to flip being Dom and Sub. Love a switch couple. Im gonna miss the every Friday lamphouse story. But i hope you get inspired to return to this story someday since there could be one off, or sequel potential. Either about the exploration of Javie with or out without Ty/Ri or the return of the doctor with Brian.
7/12/24, 5:07 PM
Which of your stories was the first chapter to this? I just found this one & finished reading it, b4 I read the note about the first chapter. Can I get the name of the story if can. Thx

7/12/24, 7:33 PM
@[Vincent the Kenku](/user/show/957809) Thank you for the alert. I just submitted the requested edits to add chapter numbers, and identified 'leather night' as the first chapter. did you like it?
7/12/24, 7:20 PM
uuuuffffffff... GREAT!
7/12/24, 4:52 PM
I can only thank you, @Naedre for this incredible ride through this week of mindblowing cause and effect, sex and emotion. Again, please let us vote in romantic (heart). It's a shame we cannot do that!

7/12/24, 5:13 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Just added that for Chapter 10 and 12, as you suggested, Corin. Once the edit gets approved, you should be able to vote "Heart" :)

7/12/24, 7:10 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
7/12/24, 6:20 PM
What a grand journey this has been. I will be sad next Friday when there is no more, but all great stories must end. I do hope you find the time and energy to return to this world. But for now you’ve earned a break. Bravo!

7/12/24, 6:28 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Well, next Friday I have a single chapter story (titled “Did you Hypnotize Me?”) scheduled to publish that is far more gray than this happy ending, although I suppose it all depends on your perspective. Then I return to publishing a multi-chapter story with at least 3 more chapters of “The Few, The Proud…” a story about enhanced super-soldiers. That story is similar in tone to this one, with some “wholesome” moments and some dark ones. So I do have at least another 4 weeks of Fridays set to publish. Just no more Genies for a bit.
7/12/24, 4:41 PM
Well that escalated a ton! Not saying it’s good or bad but I love how the story is going. I love how deeply hypnotized that Ed or Dicklicker is. To be honest, if I can get into trance and hypnotized at all, I’d love to go through what he’s going through! I still don’t know how this story is gonna end since so many curveballs are happening and that’s keeping me excited about the next chapters!
7/12/24, 3:56 PM
Great start, I love the need as the sub discovers the joy of being a sub. Really puts me in the mindset... or makes me want to do that to someone else.
7/12/24, 3:17 PM
You say doesn't need a sequel and then you tack on a needless teaser. Now it doesn't feel finished.