Recent Comments

6/18/25, 11:26 AM
Damn what a hot series! Had me chubbed up and stroking throughout. Wish I were Jason. Looking forward to the rest of the days of the week!
FDR
6/17/25, 4:26 PM
Amazing story, even if it was written using AI, like someone noted. Keep writing!

6/18/25, 10:58 AM
@[FDR](/user/show/10048554) Thanks so much. Yeah, I wanted to admit to the AI use to be fair to readers since I submitted this as a contest and only realized afterwords how seriously people take that stuff right now. If HOW I make stories detracts from the fantasies the stories trigger, I probably won't post here as much, but it means a lot that you and so many others responded and seem glad I posted this one ;).
6/17/25, 1:02 PM
Just a stunning story man. I deliberately took my time and made the story last because I didn’t want it to end. Maybe add some new characters for next part or series? Maybe Milo has a brother with the same gift and transforms others? Maybe Joey has a cousin or brother who comes to visit and gets in deep with Milo or Axel? How does Marcus further descend into mindless adoration?

6/18/25, 10:55 AM
@[Sinatraguy74](/user/show/10007968) Thanks for writing, and I hope you revisit it as often as you want to relive it! I'm not sure I'll continue this exact story but hearing all these comments is giving me some ideas (Milo ordering the football team to all wear pink panties for him keeps popping into my mind), and I would LOVE to write a story about two controllers competing over the same thralls with their powers, thanks for making me think of that!
6/17/25, 11:46 AM
Hot story, but I am 90% sure this was written with AI. Am I wrong?

6/18/25, 10:51 AM
@[Btmboy64](/user/show/10049322) Hey, thanks for reading it, and thinking it's hot. I used SudoWrite for some of it. My feelings with AI right now are that it's okay to create the basic outline, as long as I go back and revise it to make sure it has my voice in it (Any tool that means I don't need to edit my writing until 4am is something I'm going to explore)
6/17/25, 5:04 AM
Great story! I love a slowly corrupted narrator who realizes something is amiss even as he is drawn inexorably into the power of the villain. You've got a great sense of pace, keeping the tension high while still getting into the thoughts of the narrator and fleshing out minor side characters. The scene with milo and the RA was a great touch. It reminds me of some of my favorite stories on this site: Master of the House, Bolshoi Papa, Tel Aviv, and Blind Spot.

6/18/25, 10:48 AM
@[Chesire cat](/user/show/10001871) Thank you for the kind comment! Yeah, I'll just say this has been a fantasy of mine for a long while now, so I'm glad people are responding to it. I haven't read all of those stories yet, I guess I have to now thanks to you!
6/18/25, 9:52 AM
Just simply FANTASTIC!
Zander
6/18/25, 8:51 AM
It's a pity the story ended at the most interesting point.
6/18/25, 12:48 AM
Great buildup to the action. I don’t always get hard reading erotic stories but this certainly brought things up. Wished it were me affected by the pheromones. Good job!

6/18/25, 6:33 AM
@[DW58](/user/show/10003124) Haha, I feel you on that second to last sentence. Really glad you enjoyed the story!
6/18/25, 6:22 AM
Well, what can I say? That's a great start. and I hope we won't have to wait too long for the next chapter!
6/17/25, 12:13 PM
Did DC-1001 zip up its heavy suit or let its penis dripping lubricant and cum freely when it resumed secondary tasks in the corner of dungeon in the end?

6/18/25, 6:06 AM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) Next chapter will address your question…

6/18/25, 6:20 AM
@[Latexboy4788](/user/show/10062968) Can't wait to read the next chapter, best drone story in a while!