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6/27/24, 12:14 AM
Great Story!
Anonymous
6/26/24, 4:11 PM
The "guess my true name" (Rumpelstiltskin device) with the twist at the end that he had changed himself, they never could have guessed his true name, was oddly hot and unexpected. Not my usual kinks throughout the rest of the story, but nicely written and well structured.

6/27/24, 12:11 AM
@Anonymous Thank you!
6/26/24, 8:03 PM
It’s great to see this continued! I wonder if Josh will figure out he can’t trust Mitchell anymore before it’s too late?

6/26/24, 10:06 PM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Pretty sure that’s going to partially depend on if mitchel brings food/drink with him to the conversation.

6/26/24, 10:06 PM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Hey, Loxley! Thanks for commenting. Yeah this part took a while for me to finish, but finally, here it is. We shall see if Josh can figure out Mitchell is compromised in time... Thanks for reading!
6/26/24, 11:15 AM
Besides the hot chapter, there's some great setup going on here, too. It sounds Carl was surprised to hear about Sam. I guess they fell out of touch for a while... I wonder how much they know what's really going on with each other. I bet Sam would have a lot to discuss with Ahmed... maybe show him how to do to Carl what he did to Brian. Between the two of them, they could drain Dad and son empty and end the family line. It's been so hot seeing Brian react to his son going the same way he has already.

6/26/24, 8:45 PM
@[tomtales](/user/show/10001207) Glad you're loving the story. Honestly don't think Ahmed needs anyone to teach him anything. He he
Anonymous
6/26/24, 8:08 PM
My name is Hamed, I am 22 years old, tall and thin. One night at 2:00 am I was tramping like many other nights. I had maked my hair spiky. I was wearing a shiny black shirt and a pair of tight low-waist jeans with a studded cowboy belt. I always dress like this. I picked on a truck driver on the road near where I live on the pretext that he was speeding when crossing the intercity road, and I fighted and cursed him hooliganism, then he also came down and we fight together. I acted like a thug. Suddenly, two other people came from the back of the truck to help him (I thought he was alone). I couldn't escape and I got caught by those three cowards. The truck driver took my one of my feet and another one took my hand. The third one opened a road on my head with an old handy hair shaver that I didn't understand where he got it from, and then they kicked me and left. The next morning I had to go to a barber. I went to a Itinerant barber who was a fat Afghani man whom I knew. There was a waste and garbage collection area nearby. I explained the story them. There was also a homeless guy and both of them laughed at me. The barber said I have to make your hair shaved, that too with the number zero! I was forced to sit. Barber guy first shaved the right half of my head, which those cowards had opened the road, then half of my head became shaved while staying the other half spiky. So he shaved the left side, then it was just only the spiky hair in the middle of my head, which was like a wall in the middle of my head from the back to the front, and I had become like a punk. I was like that for a while, and then he shaved me from the back of my head and came to the front of my head and then I became full shaved. The homeless man took the head shaver in his hand and helped barber and carefully walked the head shaver on my head so that not even a single hair was left. After that, they rubed their hands on my head, which was rough like sandpaper. I suddenly felt enjoy: my cock became horny. They saw the it from the tight pants. The stray man put his rough hands on the crotch of my jeans and rubbed me. The barber guy also rub his hands on my head and sometimes kissed my head. At the same time, his rough stubble was being rubbed on my rough head. At the end I stayed with a shaved head which was like sandpaper! Email: Hamed.bezani2000@gmail.com
luna
6/26/24, 6:19 PM
will you be continuing the story?
6/26/24, 4:27 PM
Damn Simon is hot as fuck. Hoping to read about him getting fucked also.
6/26/24, 2:34 PM
Great story made me hard reading, but I think the title doesn't fit the overall story.

6/26/24, 2:41 PM
@[TeddybearTO](/user/show/10005146) Thank you for your comment. I’m curious about the title too. What do you suggest the story be titled? I’m open for ideas as I could not think of one that fit well.
6/25/24, 11:15 PM
I vote g string

6/26/24, 2:14 PM
@[Chesire cat](/user/show/10001871) haha unfortunately the next chapter is already written
HypnoMutt
6/26/24, 1:10 PM
Would love to see you continue this excellent story!