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6/23/24, 7:20 AM
Once again the use of the word pathetic. The rest of the paragraph was very positive thinking by the new bottom boy,. However by including the word pathetic in there, you give room for him to think badly about himself for bottoming. He should be happy and proud that he is giving of himself to the pack. Not feel negative about it. Sorry, I can get stuck on little things sometimes. But, it really breaks the flow for me. Btw - I haven’t said it, but I wouldn’t be all the way to this chapter if I wasn’t enjoying the writing.

6/23/24, 7:24 AM
@[Thomas White](/user/show/10051527) I understand dude I do. But it’s coming from a place of love and affection. I’ll try and explain more in this next chapter that I’m hoping is coming soon. Writers block is a bitch haha. I apprecite the feedback!
6/23/24, 7:09 AM
It’s great that they are boosting him back up at this point. However, calling someone pathetic doesn’t really seem to belong in the discussion in this chapter. Just one use of a term like that (pathetic isn’t a positive term no matter the tone of voice) could undo all the positive work done recently. That would only work if the guy got off on being degraded which doesn’t seem to be the current plan. Sorry, it just really slammed me in the face and broke the flow of the story for me. Tom

6/23/24, 7:22 AM
@[Thomas White](/user/show/10051527) I understand it’s not for everyone. But the implication here isn’t trying to like maliciously degrade him. It’s meant in a playful and teasing context. I have a friend who loves being called a loser. But because it’s being said as playful/endearing it makes him feel good because he knows it’s coming from a place of caring. That’s kinda what Titan is going for with calling him pathetic here. It’s mean to be playful and sweet. I do understand where you are coming from with it. And maybe I tossed it out there a little without the right context. But I promise he is enjoying it.
6/23/24, 6:18 AM
I don't care that it's short, I really appreciate the work you do❤️‍🩹. I really liked these scenes, very erotic. I hope you enjoy your break a lot, and that you can return soon to write more of this sexy story 😈
Jun 14, 2024
6/14/24, 10:36 PM
I normally don't like first person stories but felt like I wanted to give this a go. I was not disappointed at all in the story or the writing. I am left with a wondering of how Eric ended up with a cock in his ass. It's a tantalizing prospect.

6/14/24, 11:08 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thanks! Yeah, there was a couple of ways that could have gone, but ultimately I decided it was more exciting to start in the middle of it.

6/23/24, 6:12 AM
@Wakeup Keep coming back to this one. It's so satisfying to read and the end is such beautiful karma.
6/23/24, 5:03 AM
How did I miss you posting this one man? Loved it!
6/23/24, 4:51 AM
I love coming back to this series!
thesaxcat
6/23/24, 2:32 AM
Amazing work. You are becoming a favorite writer of mine quite quickly!
6/23/24, 12:18 AM
I have to agree with everyone else - this was exceptional. I read it in segments, stopping every time the story made me cum. Multiple orgasms is very high praise, just FYI. 😈 I disagree that this needs further chapters; I think Mark's story is perfectly self-contained here. The hotness of the story lies in turning a Dom into a sub, and Mark will never be a Dom again. What I would love to see is Rob working his magic on someone else, in different circumstances. Probably still a leather bar, since his leather was a big part of it for me, but maybe targeting an abusive, bullying Dom. Maybe someone who is genuinely contemptuous of slaves, subs, and even bottoms - men who don't measure up in his eyes to whatever ideal of manhood his father beat into him. Some who would react violently to the mere suggestion that he try getting fucked himself. I did wonder, after I finished, just how much attention poor Mark is going to get. After all, someone so adept at making slaves is bound to already have a few.
Anonymous
6/22/24, 11:13 PM
Take the rest you need it!! The stories have been amazing to read, loving the involuntary normalisation of their situations for themselves. I hope to see a bit more sensual activity for them in the future ones that involve ways that prove how evil their actions were that placed them in this situation. I loved the story of his son abusing his father unknowingly more because of the obvious attempt to show them how evil they are. I loved the transformation chapter with the neighbours as well, that was beyond hot hope to see some exhibitionist transformations with Greg ;) Anyway loving the trajectory of these stories!!
Mindwhisperer
6/22/24, 5:32 PM
Okay, and the next chapter will hopefully drop while we still **_remember_** this "series?"