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6/21/24, 9:04 PM
Wait! Tyler wished that he, Noah and Joe would be protected from any type of mind control and hypnosis counts as a type of mind control!! So basically, even if they copy Brain's wish, Riley's new hypnotic abilities are useless unless they want to be hypnotized! Genius! I can't wait to see how they use this to their advantage, and how it will turn the tide.

6/21/24, 10:28 PM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) I agree, i cant wait to see what will be Brian's reaction. He really gets to my nerve. He is a well written antagonist.

6/22/24, 9:19 AM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) Yeah but Brian's wish... if they accept having the pheremones bit then they consent to the hypnosis, and Tyler's wish has that 'with consent' addendum. So who knows how that's going to go.
HypnoBoy
6/22/24, 6:01 AM
This was extremely hot!! Would love to see the MC getting too cocky for his own good tho. Maybe it is time for him to learn a lesson too

6/22/24, 7:17 AM
@[HypnoBoy](/user/show/10051407) Thanks for the read! I’m thinking of switching POV over to Lias. I’ve never written from a bottom’s perspective so I’ll have to see. My biggest question when it comes to the next chapter is whether people would want the reversal to be undone? Though at the moment, I’m thinking of taking things farther than the current power dynamic. Anyways, I’ve submitted a different story for review (I know, I’ve got my fingers in a lot of pies atm) so I’ll get back to this one now. I’ve got a general direction to go in plot-wise.
6/22/24, 7:04 AM
The best, as always!!!
6/22/24, 6:33 AM
Another well-written and fantastic chapter, the cyborg army is increasing. loved how the rubber coating envelops Tariq. i see an upgrade has happened, allowing an upgrade to be completed by sexual intercourse - wonder what is happening to the original cyborgs? maybe a signal can be sent to them to join the army. Maybe Tom, needs to be programmed to assist Alexei
Anonymous
6/22/24, 6:25 AM
G G Fantastic
Jun 21, 2024
6/22/24, 6:19 AM
Amazing thanks
Rubberspiraldronthiago
6/22/24, 6:02 AM
I love this history...please more more .. i am admiras you
6/22/24, 3:49 AM
If not for the hypnosis, these two would get an award for the stupidest men on Earth. :rofl:
6/22/24, 3:25 AM
Very interested to see what happens when Tariq returns to MI5.
6/22/24, 12:15 AM
I want more of Jun’s story!