Recent Comments

5/15/25, 6:12 PM
J'aimes bien l'histoire mais je ne suis pas un grand amateur de ce forma de dialogue, surtout sur mon logiciel de synthèse audio. Je sais que tu es capable d'écrire come un histoire typique. J'espère que tu adopteras un style, et 'j'ai bien hâte au prochain chapitre, j'aime bien les descriptions des habit.

5/15/25, 11:30 PM
@[Someone Else](/user/show/10047963) Oui, désolé, je n'écris pas pour du livre audio haha mais pour moi, ce format est plus clair et lisible et me correspond mieux pour m'y retrouver. Je tâcherai d'y penser pour l'avenir de simplifier le format si je trouve quelque chose de plus adaptable.
5/15/25, 10:40 PM
Thanks for the positive feedback, everyone! I enjoyed writing this, I'm hoping to get another chapter in this story out soon!
5/15/25, 11:16 PM
Mmm hungry for more
5/16/25, 12:38 AM
Hot.... can't wait for more
5/16/25, 12:46 AM
First of all, thank you for moving away from AI. This chapter was ABSOLUTELY worth the wait Second of all, I can't wait to see what the "new normal" is for Ethan and Alex in the morning. I hope there are more changes In store for both of them :)
5/16/25, 12:53 AM
The antics here are super hot and sexy.

5/19/25, 2:11 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Always fun to know people are enjoying my back catalogue (aka my only catalogue, as I seem to have gotten off the authorship horse 😅)
5/16/25, 1:20 AM
I’m so glad you came back to this story! I was waiting (im)patiently for an update, lol. Also, kudos to you for writing this yourself!! Writing is no joke, but you did a really excellent job. This chapter has a different feel - it’s more intimate. You’re taking this story in a really great direction and I can’t wait to see what you do next!
5/16/25, 4:23 AM
Can't wait for more!
5/16/25, 4:31 AM
Love, would love to read more of these kind
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5/16/25, 7:21 AM
I really want to give this story a chance but the writing. ... its painfully distracting. It feels more like a rough draft that a high schooler sent in over text message. Does it get better after this?

5/16/25, 2:22 PM
@forced Hi forced! I must apologize 4 the overuse of CAPS....I was just getting started and I used caps for emphasis (or force by the villian(s))-- I will let you know that others shared your feelings, and I did my best to improve on this....it does reduce (after a couple of chapters)-- I hope you continue with the story! Thanks 4 the support/interest!