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11/2/24, 1:58 PM
fantastic fun! I like Dr. Grant

Hypno-boy
11/2/24, 3:42 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) ❤️
11/2/24, 3:30 PM
I actually like the end of this story, we have too many “bad end” stories that it’s refreshing to see a more hopeful one!
11/2/24, 5:41 AM
I can't wait to see where you take the story

11/2/24, 3:30 PM
@[Reddogsss](/user/show/10033308) That's so nice of you to say. What would you have liked to see? I really only intended for this to be a short story. I did kill Kyle off. A new short story with my same horror intention just got published though. The Thompson's are the same family from [The Dark Twin](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10010764) and Ramsey is sent to [Mental Health Spa of Oakland Hills](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10007814) (but caution, I was a new writer writing for the first time like less than a year). Kyle's father Kasen's crypto company will appear again in a large story that I'm editing, but that will be after another large story I'm finishing editing.
Anonymous
11/2/24, 2:45 PM
Where can I get that hive mind perception warping introspection drug?
10/27/24, 5:53 PM
Hot story.

11/2/24, 1:51 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you!
Anonymous
11/2/24, 1:51 PM
The way he slowly gets dumber is so hot. The way he becomes unable to wear clothes. He could become an apeman too :D
Anonymous
11/1/24, 1:30 PM
Amazing story and great characters. Poor Henry though - it feels like Howie wanted to punish him the worst of all. The other two bullies both got changed but ended up as kind of super studs. I’m glad he got his wrestler jock body back and didn’t have to stay as a skinny twink, but why did he get singled out by Howie to end up nullified and everyone’s bitch?

11/1/24, 3:40 PM
@Anonymous Well the original idea was to play on the idea of "Maiden, Mother, Crone" with gay body/stereotypes. Henry as the big beefy wrestler gets turned into the more effeminate twink, Johnny as a self proclaimed "bad boy" turns into the "daddy" authority type and Taylor is left to be the jock. A few original drafts had the boys transformed one by one where Johnny would eventually daddy dom a still straight Taylor as he was fucked into becoming a jock slut while Henry power bottomed Taylors cock into growing. However, as I wrote, other scenes emerged and trying to fit that in felt a bit forced/repetitive. The remnants of that idea show up when Henry has his mind reverted to straight but still enjoys being fucked. I never really saw Henry as "everyone's bitch", but if he ended up that way its his retribution for lording his masculinity over other guys in the past.

Anonymous
11/2/24, 1:29 PM
@[Vussy](/user/show/10027154) However you ended up with the story, it’s amazing. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.
Oct 18, 2024
11/2/24, 1:25 PM
Didn’t expect that ending either….
11/2/24, 12:50 PM
Any idea when a new chapter will be posted? No pressure, of course, but just looking forward to more of this great story!
11/2/24, 12:20 PM
Excellent characterisation, zombification, cock growth and literal floods of cum?!? I don’t often say this but I really hope we get a part 2!