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HypnoMutt
10/15/24, 5:45 AM
Hey, bud, you still out there? :) Wrangling an epic like this is challenging at best, and when your richly drawn characters are demanding plotlines and story arcs of their own... I'm a playwright/composer in the middle of a long project and can relate to working through blocks. It's daunting, and it doesn't matter if you're dry as a bone or if there's a basket full of research, notes, and ideas on the table. That said, I want you to know that this story stays vivid in my memory; I think it's one of the most fully realized on the site. Like many of us, I'd love to see you take it forward if and when the spirit moves you. And even if you're done with this tale, I'll happily read anything else you choose to share; your voice and vision are compelling. Thanks, mister, and may the Muse clear a path for you.
Anonymous
10/15/24, 5:33 AM
Are updates going to be every two weeks again?
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10/15/24, 4:42 AM
Great work! I do agree the dialogue was a bit stuff, but it was still really hot! I’d love to see Desmond confess to Grux if you decide to continue the series
Kbl32
10/15/24, 3:07 AM
Awesome story! Please keep it going!🤪
10/14/24, 10:10 PM
One of the best stories I've ever read :)

10/15/24, 1:50 AM
@[benelliot](/user/show/909446) Thanks!
Anonymous
10/15/24, 1:17 AM
Dude straight up croaked but found a silver lining. Very hot read. I’m loving these vignettes!
10/15/24, 12:55 AM
great chapter !
Hypno eyes
10/15/24, 12:30 AM
This was great! I like how hard he was resisting from creaming himself so he didn't get affected by the first Wish. 🔥🔥🔥
CHT
10/14/24, 11:17 PM
yeah, he needs to be in tighty whities! This story is oddly hot
10/14/24, 11:11 PM
Love the level of detail and the internal description of the trance and all the ways in which George justifies things after being told to do so. Incredibly well written. Please keep going!