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Gxl
9/1/24, 7:15 AM
Seems like it should have maybe 1 part left until completion~ I can’t wait to see it finished :3 you’ve done so good as of sofar.

9/1/24, 3:23 PM
@Gxl There are a few chairs left actually but it is getting near the end
abc123
9/1/24, 4:03 AM
Omg i love that the dad was bottoming!! Instant favourite!

Jota23
9/1/24, 3:23 PM
@[abc123](/user/show/10005430) So glad you liked it! <3
DMK
9/1/24, 12:56 PM
Love it ! 😍

9/1/24, 3:00 PM
@[DMK](/user/show/10035742) Thank you!
9/1/24, 1:32 AM
So hot!!!

9/1/24, 3:00 PM
@[Flucky](/user/show/10033293) Thanks!
9/1/24, 2:15 PM
This was one of my favorite short stories and I’m glad to see it After malebots Disappeared. Hoping that we get to see a sequel or expanded series of stories based on this concept. This definitely turned me on a lot.
9/1/24, 2:03 PM
Can't wait for more
Aug 30, 2024
9/1/24, 2:03 PM
Glad to see this one back again!
Anon
9/1/24, 2:20 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I think that overall for Collin this would be a nightmare. But there might be a way to targe this tactically- through that familial love. That might sound strange, but Collin could merely question why William wanted to turn him. William might mention that he wants to save his brother from pain and show him pleasure, but Collin would rebut that that there are many ways he could be free from some of the struggles he's facing that don't involve turning into a demon- so why that? This would be a more harsher means for Collin to take- but he could just ask point blank if it's because William would find more pleasure in forcing Collin to become a demon- regardless of what he wants as a person. That William and the rest of his family don't really care about him anymore- they care about pleasure, and everything else is a secondary priority- that clearly William's desire to not hurt people (a core part of him) doesn't really matter anymore- even with family. He could even bring up how William seems to find it pleasing to see his own brother in severe distress, questioning what this means. If William mentions that he just wants to show his brother his love angrily asking what Collin is trying to get at, Collin could merely rebut that you don't force love onto somebody if you are sincere, so maybe William and the others don't love him anymore- after all- they really seemed happy about seeing Collin in despair- so why are they made the grandmaster was hurting him- is it because his family wants to hurt Collin now, and only they can do that, not the grandmaster (this probably would be infuriating for them to even hear spoken because they wouldn't dare do that in their own minds, but from an outside perspective, it's a valid question to ask)? This would probably lead to the demons becoming resistant to further discussion though. William might retort that Collin has been brainwashed by the grandmaster, but Collin might coldly reply that for all the harms the grandmaster did, at least he didn't try to destroy his sense of self altogether. He might even ask them point blank- do they love Collin, or do they want him dead in personality to be something they can gain pleasure out of? It could be stated that if the demons can intellectually grasp the issues with what they are doing (or possibly could), but are too drunk on pleasure to care, one could easily see them as being mired in heavy rationalizations and cognitive dissonance due to the demonization. Colin would likely not be able to trust William to not try to take any chance to be re-demonized, as seen with Garret's freak out when he was made human in body again (what happened to him I wonder? I kind of would like to see a second debate on the matter he and Collin had). So Collin could merely point out that if William believes that loving his brother means causing him emotional pain and then driving him insane, than what makes him any better than the enemy that threatened to kill him and his family (granted the beastfolk are also complicated amidst all this), but that's a point he could use. Of course, it might be more efficient is somebody else uses this point- like the grandmaster. Collin would be way too close to the situation. But Collin saying it might be more effective. Granted, this may not work at all and the demons may go into rationalizations like how it's for the greater good to break eastern repression. This is probably a much more ruthless approach than Collin would take though, but I could see this happening if things go really south had they been imprisoned (the demons). More than likely Collin would start with asking if he's good enough, or if the demons don't love him anymore- if the revelation of what his demon name was to be comes out- he might coldly remark that if they wanted him to be an embodiment of despair for the world, and found pleasure in that, then clearly they can never love who he is now. They can only force and break him to be what they want- it's never been about love, but possession. The problem is that the demonic transfiguration so alters thoughts (and the demons do make some good points) that it can be really hard I suspect to intellectually grasp the problems with converting everybody (granted that is by design). If the East is an agarian country with some cities, and share a border with the north, considering the culture of the north (hasn't gone bonkers over one of the gods and has mostly kept their senses even if not human form), that's probably where survivors will go. The East at this rate is likely doomed to become a demonic outpost which will relentlessly encroach into the other nations unless Collin can pull off a miracle (I have little to no faith in the king after his romantic escapades which was essentially a blatant security risk). The south is likely too far away to serve as an escape route destination.

Pcm
9/1/24, 4:30 AM
@[Anon](/user/show/10049352) Collin's argument on that would assume that William did not revognize that his actions would hurt Collin emotionally. I would heacanon that William and the demons realized that they would effectively be tormenting him, but demonhood had rewired their brains to make it feel erotic, even the death of Collins's old personality. Recognizing that once demonized, Collin would look back to the torment they inflicted on him as highly eroti as well. Their love had been so twisted. This is likely not going to be made canon as it would make Collin's family too dark and sinister in my opinion, and brought about an element of 'abuse' into the story that I don't want. The truth is, I enjoy letting Collin be his idealistic self who passionately discusses in length the idea of what's right. It is why I had him essentially lobotomize Eleven, to deprive him of that moral high ground he could use in an argument. His emotional distress at the horror of what he had done added a stake to his story, because I kinda think he could easily resist any outside tenptation. Demonhood would be his way of forgetting his guilt. Collin's reaction to his name will be featured in the next chapter! In his current, how do you thibk he will react? Garret will be there too. Ironically, some Easters will flee into the West as that's the ilonly geographically viable option. The beastment cant turn everyone, so they will have a human refugee crisis going on. It will be a reflection of the West situation in the past.

Anon
9/1/24, 10:28 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) His actions against eleven certainly will cause him massive guilt, but I think Collin knows that demonhood to escape guilt would only condemn many more and only increase his wrongdoings. He may be tempted by it, but better he live with the burden of what he did than turn into something worse, attempting to escape his guilt by dealing in further ill would be only compounding his mistakes. Garret being there will be interesting, but I think collin's reaction to his demonic name won't be fun for him- it's an antithesis to what he is. As for your headcanon I think that the most charitable view is that the demons think Collin has been used by thr grandmaster and brainwashed to accept harm for himself so they need to do whatever to fix that- even if by force. But them not caring about Collins emotional state already has echoes in this chapter, like when the demons smile at the possibility of him in despair. That sinister element is to an extent already there. The easterners fleeing west is probably fitting. At least gil will get what he wanted in a way- shame its in the worst possible means. Can't say the westerners are going to enjoy crazy demons. Eddie better hurry up and try to fix things but now I'm worried that demon who turned gregory has some horror show planned. I think ultimately if the demons in some way don't really care about the emotional harm done to collin, then they really have just come to love pleasure only- then they are okay with essentially murdering their loves ones mind to sate their own lust. They have made their own desires their sole objective, to the detriment of all else. And that is both pitiable and terrifying, and something one can only ward oneself away from. I think the fear of harming Eddie or others will stop Collin from being tempted. He's already hurt eleven and his family clearly are dangerous. If he accepts what they offer, things will just get worse. Collin has suffered much- and to see him alive but dead in spirit and turned into a slave to his own desires and the higher ranked demons (because its clear the demons have a heirarchy at least to me)- that would really be the greatest tragedy of all. If the demons try to weapnize Collins guilt against him, Collin needs to realize that while he has made a massive mistake, letting himself succumb to despair now would truly be the end of everything.
9/1/24, 2:55 AM
Extremely hot, thanks for the story! If nobody has seen the priests for three days and they been having sex non-stop then that means they have not left the room at all. Wouldnt they die from exhaustion or dehydration? Same with the choir group. Also, the lack of restroom to deal with their needs unless they continue to have sex even with waste their being released... If we assume the rule of their mouth are only used for sex then they wouldnt stop to eat or drink so at least 100 men will die all naked covered in cum which would raise a lot of questions in that world. Yeah, I know this just a sex story but I was thinking about that while I was reading it

9/1/24, 10:03 AM
@[angelcosmos](/user/show/10027730) haha don't worry, I also think about these things when I read other stories! For this one, though, I'd leave it to the readers' imagination what happens to the victims under Damien's influence. For me, although I won't say that this is actually canon (even though I'm the author lol), I'd like to think that the physical effects of Damien's powers slowly fade as he leaves the vicinity, but the mental influence remains (Damien was still just an incubus-in-training, after all). Sure, the priests and the choir group and all the other victims would be going it at it for days, but once Damien leaves, they'll slowly regain bodily control and eat, drink, and do everything they need to survive. They might even try to go back to their normal lives, but then, they'd still be corrupted and their minds and belief systems have already been altered. No way can the priests go back to being priests knowing what they did. They'd forever crave everything they did when they were under Damien's influence. Same goes with the other characters. They'd have to reconcile their new personas with their old ones. However, once Damien returns (he would already be a full incubus by then), his influence takes hold once again. Again, I'm not saying this is the official direction of the story (I don't have plans on expanding on this aspect of the story in an official capacity), but it's just the scenario I've established in my head to rationalize everything. Hope that made sense, but again, I'd also love to hear other interpretations as well!
8/12/24, 8:11 PM
Very hot. Glad you got a mention in the contest!

9/1/24, 9:50 AM
@[Coq au Vin](/user/show/916716) Thank you!