Recent Comments

7/15/24, 3:12 AM
Wow! Another Star Rail fan! Love the premise. Gonna have fun reading through the rest of this series.
7/15/24, 2:40 AM
Soooo good why did it stop?
7/15/24, 2:35 AM
Nice to see Provincetown represent! And especially enjoyed breaking the forth wall. You have such a good range as a writer.
Anonymous
7/15/24, 1:44 AM
Loved it!! As usual.
7/13/24, 8:44 PM
This is a fun little story, but it's got a narrative problem. Sometimes it's in 3rd person, sometimes it's in 1st, using "me" and "I" -- a quick edit draft would fix those problem spots and make it easier to read. Good idea!

Willie Cici
7/15/24, 1:43 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) All fixed!!! Thanks for the heads up.
7/15/24, 12:18 AM
oh i hope this becomes a series! im in love with this story and its attention to detail, especially in making it known to the reader how much love the father has fir his boys n’ ed and couldn’t gaf about helen. great story !
7/15/24, 12:01 AM
Thanks to all who stuck with the series. I know not every bit works for everyone, but we all have our individual kinks. I hope the ending was fun for all. It's been really enjoyable reading all your comments and I'm sure I'll write more soon, but I need time for ideas! Until someone actually takes up the idea and makes it happen for us all, have fun and enjoy the possibilities!
Willie CIci
7/14/24, 9:50 PM
I loved this series. The slow burn and the payoff. Well done!!!

7/14/24, 10:49 PM
@Willie CIci Much appreciated! I've been much enjoying your stories too. I banged all this out in a day, but with a good year or two of thinking up ideas before I sat down and did it. Hopefully now the creative juices are flowing I'll come up with more before too much longer ;-)
Jul 14, 2024
Anonymous
7/14/24, 10:28 PM
Hot as fuck story as always! Cant wait for more stage hypno schenanigans
Jul 7, 2024
7/14/24, 9:51 PM
This is incredibly hot!