Recent Comments

Mark
7/15/24, 1:19 AM
Great chapter! Glad you are continuing this.

7/15/24, 7:29 AM
@Mark Thank you for dropping a message! It means a lot! Glad you enjoyed it
7/15/24, 5:03 AM
I loved this! I just wish the ending was a bit longer, so we could have seen more about the Dhruvification of the dorm.
7/15/24, 4:40 AM
Wow, this was extremely hot!
7/15/24, 4:37 AM
thinking of returning to this series. give me some suggestions for wishes!
Jul 14, 2024
Lavender Lad
7/14/24, 7:31 PM
It's so good seeing you post alot more frequently, you're one of the best writers on here! I also love that you're making the hypnotist character be a lot meaner and sadistic with his victims as well as giving them self serving suggestions, hope to see more of this soon

7/15/24, 4:01 AM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Thank you! I wish I could keep pounding stuff out endlessly but unfortunately life gets in the way. Always glad when I can shepherd another one across the finish line, though! Thanks for reading!
7/15/24, 3:12 AM
Wow! Another Star Rail fan! Love the premise. Gonna have fun reading through the rest of this series.
7/15/24, 2:40 AM
Soooo good why did it stop?
7/15/24, 2:35 AM
Nice to see Provincetown represent! And especially enjoyed breaking the forth wall. You have such a good range as a writer.
Anonymous
7/15/24, 1:44 AM
Loved it!! As usual.
7/13/24, 8:44 PM
This is a fun little story, but it's got a narrative problem. Sometimes it's in 3rd person, sometimes it's in 1st, using "me" and "I" -- a quick edit draft would fix those problem spots and make it easier to read. Good idea!

Willie Cici
7/15/24, 1:43 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) All fixed!!! Thanks for the heads up.