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Jul 11, 2024
7/14/24, 3:29 AM
this definitely needs a part 2
7/13/24, 5:01 PM
I'm so into RPG and the D&D terms added to the hotness of the story. Great job, author!

7/14/24, 2:54 AM
@[PaladinJock](/user/show/10052351) Thanks! Part two has been submitted so hopefully you'll be able to see it very soon.
7/14/24, 2:49 AM
anxious for more
7/13/24, 2:28 PM
Duuuuuudeeee, we need other chapter! This serie is basically the future we all want! Thanks as always for your hard and horny work, keep writing and transforming the whole world to turn on us all! Love your work 🥰

7/13/24, 4:18 PM
@[DDS.DD](/user/show/10018919) Haha I'm on it, I'm on it! I started the next chapter where we revisit the governor of Texas and the President...but now I think I want to do something else instead so I may be needing another scenario....perhaps something in a city office block....

7/13/24, 11:14 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) do the office first and then the Governor and the president afterwords

7/14/24, 1:01 AM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) that is just a suggestion, of course, sorry if it sounded rude
7/14/24, 12:49 AM
Not really rooting for Alex at this point, feels like he's kinda starting to cross some lines and I'm worried he might be one of those people who would be just as bad as his tormentors if the roles were reversed.

Anonymous
7/14/24, 12:59 AM
@[Mostly Ghostly](/user/show/10041149) Not really. He’s just being a spazz. Or maybe… Kinda? They are just kids, not just Alex. In THIS situation, the roles are reversed, and while they’re doing things not quite to the agreement, it’s still within some semblance of consent… Sort of. Just about anybody would be willing to take up actions with reversed roles, but that’s a philosophical discussion that would be going in a lot deeper than just a story about kink and bully fetish.
7/13/24, 11:47 PM
Any chance this story could can come back?
7/13/24, 8:55 PM
A marvelous ending to a marvelous story! When I imagined the ending for Brian I didn't consider a genuine chance for a redemption arc, which makes me much more appreciative of your choice. It's uncommon in erotic stories, hell, it's uncommon in regular stories, so kudos to you. At the end I thought about that, on the macro, the A plot is Tyler and Javi vs Brian and slave Riley in battle of brains (and cock) for freedom, justice and love, while the B plot is Noah and Joe on a quest to make the world a better place by turning it into a global orgy. Of course it's more complicated than that, and definitely not a bad thing, but I just found it amusing and felt clever pointing it out. The only thing I felt missing from the plot is the restoration of the lives of to British folks who's lives Brian had destroyed because they dared existing. One last thing I would like to mention is that I really loved Javi's character development. He was always sweet and caring, but as he became more independent and sassy he became more fun and a "djin fatal". If you ever decide to do a spin off, I would definitely like to read about Javi travelling the world and serving some sexy wholesome justice.
Dec 31, 2018
rubberrobin
7/13/24, 8:54 PM
The story has improved
7/13/24, 7:09 PM
Neeeeeed more!! This is great thanks for sharing.

7/13/24, 8:45 PM
@[Furrybttm40](/user/show/10010813) Thank you. It means a lot. Glad you like it. More to come.
Anonymous
7/12/24, 3:02 PM
"I dont think this story needs a sequel" he says and proceeds to drop the biggest cliffhanger. ! This story was great from start to finish! Thank you for sharing it

7/12/24, 3:06 PM
@Anonymous Mwhahahahah! Perhaps *I* was the villain the whole time! But seriously, I said what I wanted to say via this story, so thematically it doesn't need a sequel. But I do hate closing off worlds. Every story goes ever onwards, and so does this one. I might return to it when inspiration hits. :)

Anonymous
7/12/24, 4:48 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) I hope inspiration will hit you some day. I want to see what happens to Brian and see the doctor get his just desserts!

7/13/24, 8:32 PM
@Anonymous Exactly!