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7/13/24, 6:55 AM
You can't have it both ways! I've read many series I've enjoyed on this site, but never one where I'm following the schedule to read it. Thank you for the journey you took us on.
Anonymous
7/13/24, 5:22 AM
That was hot! Makes me feel very horny/patriotic lol
7/13/24, 4:48 AM
Great stuff. Can't wait.
Anonymous
7/13/24, 3:45 AM
I hope we see Peter soon, I wonder if he would think his father and brother are enjoying this way too much... as he starts to join them, maybe John could make him enjoy everything so Carl and Eric have him as a punishment
Anonymous
7/13/24, 3:45 AM
I hope we see Peter soon, I wonder if he would think his father and brother are enjoying this way too much... as he starts to join them, maybe John could make him enjoy everything so Carl and Eric have him as a punishment
7/13/24, 2:15 AM
what happened to poor pablo?
7/12/24, 11:33 PM
I really liked this story. Wish I could say more than that, but it was really really good. Not just wishes and naughty fun but actual worldbuilding and story. And before that teaser I was just thinking they should probably figure out where that guy actually went. Welp.
7/12/24, 11:06 PM
I like the beginning and setting of this story, and I look forward to seeing further developments soon
hvt
7/12/24, 9:01 PM
Hot chapter. It’s good to see Eli coming to terms with himself. It’s hard to believe Alexander didn’t know about rugby house, though.
7/12/24, 8:52 PM
Oh, my heart. My HEART. A perfect ending achieved at last! I cannot thank you enough for the gift of this story--it's kept me going through some very unhappy times. Knowing that a happy ending existed for everyone...it gives me hope, too. I must say I loved the sequence where Tyler's two halves were literally divided--you did a fantastic job presenting them as aspects rather than split personalities, and the hypnosis scene to make it happen was also incredibly hot. And while the sex scene was scorching, my favorite parts were the affirmation of love and, more importantly, the single phrase "It's about us." That, I think, was the key to understanding this entire story: the idea of sex, love, and everything in between being best when it's a mutual, respectful experience that satisfies *all* parties involved. Brian was only ever interested in his own satisfaction, and THAT made him the villain; everyone else had the seeds of mutual enjoyment all along, and watching them blossom was a wonderful journey. Speaking of Brian, I must say that you gave him the best ending possible--a chance at redemption. As Javi said, it could take him centuries to learn how to be a good person, but you gave him the possibility while still making him work for it. Having him magically become a "good guy" would have felt cheap; having him earn it over labor and shared experiences is far more rewarding and realistic. And then that surprise ending! Strangely I'm not as worried as I should be--the magic of the Lamphouse will likely protect Javi and the gang in future adventures (especially the ability to warp back in the face of death). But the idea that Doctor Torralva is still lurking out there makes for a great cliffhanger, as does the idea of Javi, Riley, and Tyler traveling around and granting wishes. I wonder if Javi knows?... All told, this has been a fascinating story: a character study in people realizing their sexuality (not just their orientation, but their true selves and what makes them happy), a brilliant case in how to write foreshadowing and well-crafted plots, sex scenes balanced with character development and adventure, and--best of all, I think--something that united *everyone* in the comment section and got us all eager to see what happens next. You, @Naedre, have a true gift for writing, and I now make a wish of my own: I wish that you will never forget it! :D With gratitude, Feed Your Head